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Essay Prompt
"Why do you believe Mrs. Price acted the way she did?"
Write a five-paragraph essay (outline guide) responding to this prompt. Your essay should include an introduction with a hook, thesis, and roadmap of your three arguments; three body paragraphs, each with a clear argument supported by evidence from the story; and a conclusion that synthesizes your ideas.
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